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Poetry
Sept 14, 2004 5:47:05 GMT -5
Post by Jarous on Sept 14, 2004 5:47:05 GMT -5
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Sept 15, 2004 11:02:51 GMT -5
Post by Japanese on Sept 15, 2004 11:02:51 GMT -5
Jarous, thanks for the poem ;)and the link to that site. I was not a poetry type of person, but I am starting to like it.
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Cactus
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Poetry
Sept 19, 2004 19:51:27 GMT -5
Post by Cactus on Sept 19, 2004 19:51:27 GMT -5
I think it's lovely, but I must admit that I read it when I was feeling a bit down so, it made me feel even more sad. Do you write poetry often? I used to, but I just shut down, somehow, and don't really feel inspired to do or say anything. I guess it would be akin to screaming a silent scream. Nobody ever hears even though you can feel yourself breaking with the effort. I hope you'll post another one sometime...
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Poetry
Sept 19, 2004 22:41:27 GMT -5
Post by canisay182 on Sept 19, 2004 22:41:27 GMT -5
i write poetry but mine really sucks so i probably wont put any of it here.
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Sept 20, 2004 20:09:45 GMT -5
Post by strawberrysweetie on Sept 20, 2004 20:09:45 GMT -5
Hey, that's pretty good. I've tried to write poetry to get out my feelings, and it's worked some, but I'm not that great at it. I think I try too hard using my brain to make it come out right rather than just letting my emotions take over the writing. I wish I could write it better, though, that would be cool. It's one way to be heard by others. I'd especially love to write and perform songs, but neither of those are possible for me to do.
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Poetry
Sept 25, 2004 14:21:51 GMT -5
Post by Jarous on Sept 25, 2004 14:21:51 GMT -5
Thank you all for the apreciation, Great, write something (anything) and share with us I know - I hate that I can make people cry - every fool can do that - I fear I'll never be able to make anyone smile ... oh, well... I understand - but it's a great way to vent your feelings - even if nobody ever hears them. Some emotions are not prudent to hold within... Well, if you really want to ... then here are some: www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=53533Oh come on, forests would be pitiful indeed, if only those birds that sing best sang, not? And I bet you are overly critical to your work too - show us and we'll tell you
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Poetry
Oct 15, 2004 8:47:43 GMT -5
Post by Monnlightairshadow on Oct 15, 2004 8:47:43 GMT -5
Jarous i love poetry..and i really like that poem.....u shld join this site www.awritersfountain.co.uk where i go and write my poems too...my nickname in tht site is Freespirit4ever2 they offer you good feedback and it's a guarantee tht u'll get a reply to ur poems since the manager of the site is an editor and writer.
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Poetry
Oct 16, 2004 20:02:28 GMT -5
Post by SadSadSoul on Oct 16, 2004 20:02:28 GMT -5
Jarous that was a great poem, I also read a few others and they remind me of myself. I have a question how did you get to the level you're at now in writing poetry, when you first began were your poems crap or were you naturally good at it. I would love to be able to write something like that, my need to find a way to be express my creativity, if I have any.
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peekaboo
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Poetry
Dec 20, 2004 23:41:15 GMT -5
Post by peekaboo on Dec 20, 2004 23:41:15 GMT -5
A poem that I wrote not to long ago.....when I was feeling truley hurt and alone. Why do I feel myself slipping away, with each day Dreams and Goals are drifting into my outerspace A lost soul is what I am my heart is cold I feel alone Growing old as time wifts by with no mercy sitting in my chair contemplating my next step I want to fly away on silent wings but invisible chains keep me bound Praying for a better tomorrow with sorrowful eyes I look towards the future disappointed with the hand life has dealt me I wish tomorrow would never arrive But!Oh! It does ...teasing me demons whisper in my ear... laughing and taunting..you worthless piece of shit. Overdose, Overdose, Overdose is what their chanting Distorting my thoughts with vain imaginations of how to do the double no no. Clawing my back digging deeper and deeper reaching for my soul This is where the truth lies hidden like buried treasure The pain is to much to bear The horror of facing another tomorrow afraid it'll bring much sorrow I wanna get it done but what have I won in the long run Another life of living in hell's inferno, eternal damnation is what I'll be facing So wtih this choice to live through pains and struggles. I choose eternal life for there my prize is won My dream to be set free from these chains that bind me Flying free into a neverending happily ever after Until...then I'll be here praying and hoping guarding my soul Till ...The End!!!
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Dec 21, 2004 4:34:16 GMT -5
Post by Sweet Pea on Dec 21, 2004 4:34:16 GMT -5
Clawing my back digging deeper and deeper reaching for my soul This is where the truth lies hidden like buried treasure I really loved these lines! You have talent. I hope you keep writing poetry.
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Jan 3, 2005 4:58:28 GMT -5
Post by Jarous on Jan 3, 2005 4:58:28 GMT -5
Jarous that was a great poem, I also read a few others and they remind me of myself. Thanks, it always feels very assuring when you are reminded that others feel exactly like you do ... like "you're not alone." I have a question how did you get to the level you're at now in writing poetry, when you first began were your poems crap or were you naturally good at it. Right, when I first began, they were crap ... and they stayed that way without a change till now. Anyway, I think people can write best when their feelings are strongest - when the pain is most bitter, the joy sweetest, the calm most profound... I would love to be able to write something like that, my need to find a way to be express my creativity, if I have any. I understand, you should try, no matter what you write, it will ease your mind ... or if not that, make you frustrated in a different way - and that can never hurt, can it? O:-)
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Jan 9, 2005 6:32:17 GMT -5
Post by Cassava on Jan 9, 2005 6:32:17 GMT -5
Oh how I miss you princess My angel with the ever changing hair Colour, length or style Which ever disguise you choose I don’t care
To me you always look perfect A huggable body which I was too shy to hold A beaming smile, eyes full of life Your appearance to me was worth more than jewels, diamond or gold
I miss the time we spent together You brought so much joy to my life at the start But towards the end things seemed to turn sour I could sense that we were drifting apart
When the break up came, I didn’t know how to take it Being rejected made me run away I acted like an idiot towards you from then on When the real truth is I should have begged you to stay
Things are now how they were before I met you I’ll waste away my life indoors Outside there are only painful reminders Places we went to awaken memories which hurt more than blistering sores
You touched my life, I’ll miss you I wish your feelings for me were the same But you replaced me so easily You’re totally oblivious to my suffering, hurt and pain.
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